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  Post#1 | Mar 15 2007, 21:09 + Quote Post Go to the top of the page
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M.F.S.
Major Flaw System. The M.F.S. is corresponding set of computers that could detect flaws in a large network of digital structures. The system was designed by a professor named Sesell Waters, while studying the Chaos Theory. M.F.S. was based one a simple product. The answer to predict things far off into the future. Sesell’s idea on the Chaos Theory was a simple one. Once an event has occurred the event could be redone all in the same way but the result would always be different. M.F.S. only existed in the mind of Sesell. He was the only soul to know it. M.F.S. was a fragile idea and he treated it like glass. At the age of 73 Sesell finished the plans for the chaotic device, he begin the final step, the most important step of all. The construction of The Major Flaw System…


Sesell’s eyes studied his work; it was finally ready for the final stage. He worked endlessly on the M.F.S. and he was near completing it. No one had believed that It was possible. To predict an event far off into the distant future. An educated guess would be history. And his name would live on forever. He gazed at the room in front of him. It was full of materials that he need in order to finish it. Steel pipes, a set of complex computers, wires, tables, moderating systems, new programs that he made just for the project. This was going to be no easy task. He had no help he was on his own and no prior knowledge of what how to construct this. Oh sure he had an idea but nothing that would essentially help him. He sat down and gazed at the circle room. White paint and nothing else this was strictly for the M.F.S.
“Let us begin.” He murmured. Biting his lip as he stepped forward and started working.

Dace’s eyes drifted over the classroom. The teacher stood at the head of the room preaching about Mathematics and the effect it has on us the students. He bore an old man appearance wearing a plaid shirt and black pants. His shoes were brown and a pair of checkered socks reached for his knees.

It's a very small intro....


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I suppose the time for words are now.

Beakening the words for Silent Sound.

Stand here and wait, and see.

For the vision is gray with me.

Stand here, and see what I know.

Or been gone and go.


See what is seen.

Known to be keen.

There is rise to the ground.

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Yes but it's not finsihed. That's why I asked JR about the publishing.


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I suppose the time for words are now.

Beakening the words for Silent Sound.

Stand here and wait, and see.

For the vision is gray with me.

Stand here, and see what I know.

Or been gone and go.


See what is seen.

Known to be keen.

There is rise to the ground.

Silent_Sound.
 
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Cool. I hope it works for out for you. I dont do much reading, so I wont be buying. (Dont take that the wrong way)


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Seem's interesting. I'm a reader so if it's being brought out here then i might be buying.
 
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its a GU book! i might buy.


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Hmm, I have to admit it's not really that much of a joy to read. And there are a few grammatical errors...


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Then you can proof read it for him.


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QUOTE(Nico @ Mar 15 2007, 22:48 ) *

Hmm, I have to admit it's not really that much of a joy to read. And there are a few grammatical errors...

I know why! You don't uderstand it...


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Beakening the words for Silent Sound.

Stand here and wait, and see.

For the vision is gray with me.

Stand here, and see what I know.

Or been gone and go.


See what is seen.

Known to be keen.

There is rise to the ground.

Silent_Sound.
 
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There are grammatical errors, and it looks ok, I wouldnt read it though, because I don't read.
 
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I dont know what every body is talking about, i like it. I would read it. Its a good start but the only thing is to work on the sequence of the story. Like think it through dont skip ahead and come back for a second. Its confuses people.


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QUOTE(lordrunners @ Mar 15 2007, 23:44 ) *
I know why! You don't uderstand it...
I understand... but it's not really interesting IMO...

Also, I thought MFS stood for Mother F*cking Sh*t tongue.gif


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Why is it always my topics?


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I suppose the time for words are now.

Beakening the words for Silent Sound.

Stand here and wait, and see.

For the vision is gray with me.

Stand here, and see what I know.

Or been gone and go.


See what is seen.

Known to be keen.

There is rise to the ground.

Silent_Sound.
 
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